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Once again
Once again Once again written December 7th, 2020 When heaven turns from light to dark the substance remains the same but the sense of it changes. What was just clearly seen now shadows only hint at ghostly outlines of mouse giants. Now the moon with her varied phases rules the shaded depths in this time of her dominion. The petals of the moss rose curl up in close surrender bereft of the sun's bright light. That which was bold curls up under evergreens to sleep on a bed of pine needles. Owls pierce the night sky derisive of the night-blind masses as they dive for their just rewards. All waits for the heavens to turn back once again from dark to light. |
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Yes, more dark and light. Some of these last few poems were written at different times and the common theme made me think of them together. And it bugs the heck out of me how this site deletes words. It really doesn't like the word "to". I can't imagine why. I swear they go up the way I intend, and the next time I look things are missing.
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12/17/2020 1:47 pm |
sounds like a plan to me, keep it going
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A nice poem, but there is so much to hate about A F F, other than its dislike of the word "to", lol Hope you are well
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The site does go through spells of dismembering our posts, and it's been happening for a long time. They never admit they're doing it and claim there's no problem every time it happens. One workaround is to repeat the post in your first comment, or just use the first comment space alone and post one or two words in the actual post. Or you can post as a graphic, using a screen shot of your text instead of typing, copying or pasting. (They still lose photos, though, so that isn't perfect. I've had problems with the erotic stories pages too. I had to edit my story there several times before it stuck. Your poem is lovely, senfully. Please keep posting and don't give up! Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Your poem makes me think of moving from dark to light as moving from the unknown into the knowing. I hope that makes sense.
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Not only is dark/light a common theme but so is nature. You do wonders with all of them. It’s true the reader can come away with a different interpretation than the writer intended but that is the unwritten contract between both sides. Neither is invalid and many times, wonderful insights are revealed. My name is MrWrong and I approved this comment
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